Indices Analysis

Okay guys.........even though my mind boggled in class, I'm gonna have a go at this analysis.

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Flesch

Step 1: Average Sentence Length * 1.015 = A 17.1
Step 2: Number of Syllables per 100 Words * 0.846 = 117.594
Step 3: A + B = C 134.694
Step 4: 206.8 – C = Readability 72.106

0 = Unreadable…100 = Very Readable

Fog
Step 1: Average Sentence Length = A 17
Step 2: Percentage of Words with Three Syllables or More = B 5
Step 3: A + B = C 22
Step 4: C * 0.4 = Fog Index 8.8

0 = Very Readable; 10 = Becoming Hard; 20 = Very hard


This has completely thrown me, but feel free to correct me if I’m wrong. I stayed with the 'easy' boundaries of the language, with inclusion of the sorts of words and phrases used by Asda, and my indices came out Flesch 72.1 and Fog 8.8. Obviously the fog analysis relates but not sure if the flesch was correct.